Roland Faunte OCT 17.2024

1. beginning: great instrumentals. long intro, but it works. I like the bass drop too 8
2. lyrics: extremely sad and poetic. 10
3. vocals: Very sad yet a touch of hope. Some may say it’s too bouncy, but I think the rhythm is very nice 8
4. instrumental: Adding instruments 1 by 1 is such a nice add, I quite like the slow rollercoaster. Something about that bell is very comforting to me. 9
5. length: 6:58 definitely on the longer side, but the meaning of the song does have a lot to cover, I think he did it very well. 8.5
6. transitions: The instruments play as the beat between. You can also just tell 9
7. bridge: I quite liked the reality of the lyrics. 9
8. ending: Where all the instrumentals crash together, with a small piano, very beautiful. Just like the beginning we go back to the small, light tune. Like a repeat. 10

Before Life erased you, and made you not part of it

This decision lasts forever

In that perfect machine that I used to be, something broke

And then it showed me the world but said I’m not apart of it

favorites: the ending lil tunes that sounds like your descending into heaven

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8.9/10

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